Revision 3, not just a defunct website anymore!
I have finished all the revisions I can to tthhee oddiissee . It is entirely free of grammatical mistakes (no promises) and is the best version of the story. It's to the point that I want to refer to the free version as an "open beta" but that sounds stupid in a way. Anyway, I've made it available to patrons and will upload it for purchase separately at some point here and on itch. This has been the most intensive re-write, I got through each chapter 3 different times including a marathon session last night where I read and edited the whole thing at once at a magnification so the text would fill my entire laptop screen. This might not be healthy, but I still caught some mistakes, so whatever, it works. I'm still gonna send this to publishers, but I think you all deserve to read it if you want, so that's what I'm doing. I'm tempering my expectations, I'm not expecting a book that features as much gay sex to sell a billion copies or whatever, but I t...